Editing

During the editing of my sequence, I felt that the feeling of another presence was not strongly enough suggested through the nursery rhyme music and flash visuals of clowns alone, and I therefore experimented with video filters and added a filter, 'viewfinder'. This made the feeling of voyeurism, and being watched much more apparent and I feel that this gives almost a chilling feeling to the viewer as it confirms suggestions and hints made previously in the sequence, and therefore brings together the narrative.

This suggestion of another presence and the disappearance of William, emphasises the feeling of danger in the sequence, and it is this danger that leads to the 'thrills', according to CHARLES DERRY.